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PostSubject: Unusual help...   Sun Mar 11, 2007 4:32 am

*For people to post their problems and others can think of a way to help them.*

My story is about three teenagers who are chosen the protect their species. It's based around one girl who is called 'the song' because when she sings, a strange force takes over her (that's why she's part of the group). Together those three teens are called 'the sight', chosen to join, chosen to give up their lives.
I don't know whether to call my book, 'Sight of the species' or 'Song of the species'.
Sight is more connected to the story, but song sounds better.

Please type 'AYE' to vote for sight. Type 'I' for song.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Mon Mar 12, 2007 10:00 am

I think Song, because Sight has been done.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Mon Mar 12, 2007 1:20 pm

When's sight of the species been done?
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Tue Mar 13, 2007 10:26 am

Like years ago, but my friend has read it.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:50 pm

I know loads of books that have the same name. What's important is that it was my idea! So, who thinks which title I should choose?
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Wed Mar 14, 2007 12:35 pm

Hey, no need to snap, you asked for help, I gave it.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Thu Mar 15, 2007 11:11 am

So true...................................so very true.Anyway I'm not sure I'll get bac to u on the choice.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sat Mar 17, 2007 8:42 am

Soz...
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:37 pm

I think song cuz it sounds cool, and if i found a story with that name i'd definitely give it a go.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Fri Mar 23, 2007 11:14 am

That sounds good great even
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:50 am

Hmm... What about 'sight'? Any votes for that?

*If anyone else needs advice on anything, they can post here. From bullying to chosing a colur to paint their room. Anything!*
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sat May 12, 2007 4:32 pm

I have a similar problem!I just can't think of a name for my book!
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Tue May 29, 2007 8:13 am

Well if you'd bother to tell us what it's about...
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Tue May 29, 2007 2:17 pm

Well,here's the prolouge:




Prologue

Meg was a normal school girl with long, flowing, golden hair and hazel coloured eyes. She probably had the most normal life a kid could have. Perhaps even a little boring of a life really. She went to school every day, leart and went home. Just a normal thing for a normal girl…but, it all started to change when she moved from Primary School to Secondary School...


*I know.It's a rubbish prolouge but like your story LM it needs to be or it doesn't really make sense.*
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Fri Sep 07, 2007 11:07 am

Ok here goes,1 of my best mates is always feeling depressed and want to cheer her up what do i do?????
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sun Sep 23, 2007 8:52 am

*To Renn*

Well, shouldn't a prolouge be a bit longer?

*To Ephemera*

Do you know why she's depressed or is she just like that? I'd suggest that you throw her a party for no reason or to get her to open up and express why she's so sad. And a little bit of humour in everyday life never hurt anyone.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:14 pm

I don't think that will work lm at first I thougt it was just a phase but it's going on and getting me down.Plus I'm not a very good listener and If it is a party she will probaly not be sad I mean she does have fun sometime like today we got a bit over exited and besides Mum probaly won't let me or phill anyway considering mums a pushover plus everyday she talks about stuff and she seems happy but she then goes all depressed and It scares me

And renn,Its ok but a bit normal and It doesn't give much of a description and I agree with lm it has to be longer.Or you could just cut the prolouge altogever Its simple and I advise you think of atitle after writing because you may add or change things that efffect the title
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:29 am

I've pretty much worked out who it is, E. A little tip then. *The following is taken out of a magazine article called 'Hormonal depressions: what to do when your friend gets them'
Don't let her/him talk about anything depressing or annoying or even just a touch sad. Also, try to get her/him to listen to the right music. Not disgustingly happy, but make sure it's a song like 'Innocence' by Avril Lavigne or 'You raise me up' which are both really is quite uplifting and hopeful. The depression will pass with time, you've just got to distract from all the bad things in life until then.

PS- If it is who I think it is, don't say anything about life or it's meaning. You'll get depressed too. I know it's hard work but when it's over, you'll have a friend for life.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Mon Jan 28, 2008 2:18 pm

Thanks for the tips I'll try although the music bits a bit hard especially considering the music I listen to is very emmbarassing and when you talk about well know songs with me It goes in one ear and out the other unless its from about 5 years ago besides I don't think anyone on here would know any of the songs I listen to so it'll be a bit hard for me.but someone you knows likes some too so it'll be okay.I hope the person in question dosen't read this...
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Thu Jan 31, 2008 10:47 am

hm..I know who it is...I might try that but it isn't easy when you agree with a few of the things they say.

If anyone can help me,I'd love the help with choosing a name for my story,I could post the first chapter if that would help.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:43 am

I guess even if you don't want to post the 1st chapter it's ok as long as you give an outline but without knowledge I can think of wings of light,and frozen ether
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:57 am

Don't post the real first chapter of your story on here, especially if you intend to publish it (HA already has done but she's a proffessional). If anyone commits plagerism, I could get sued! (If HA's story is copied, I wouldn't get sued- the person who copied it would- Renn's still too young for this to happen, I looked it up.) I apologise for this. It's not my fault.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:30 am

What does world truths mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:49 am

World truths is how healthy you are (emotionally and mentally) in relation to what you put on your posts. Mine is fixed (unfortunately) but yours will change as a special (anoymous) person good in areas of phycology sees fit. This person is not listed on the members list.
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PostSubject: Re: Unusual help...   Tue Mar 18, 2008 3:01 pm

LM you know we're meant to PM you when we join.( Embarassed sorry I didn't)What are you acctually meant to put in that PM?
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